Blog corrections: Typos and omissions of chunks of sentences...

Hey all, I have edited my most recent two posts. I don't know how I let the typos and lost bits of sentences get by me, but somehow they sure did. Having big chunks of my sentences missing took something away from the effectiveness of the arguments I was making. Add in the glaring typos and you have something like instant marginalization. Not a good thing that. So I hope I have straightened out the typo situation, and the lost chunks of sentences. Give them a review and let me know whether they are cleaned up enough, or if they are still in dire need of yet more editing.
-M